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            So very simply in love with a memory of what could have been,
                   But what could never happen.
            The background ties of two opposite motives,
            Each trying to prove the same point, and
               Make it happen.
       Your life and your sanity are on the line,
            So which will you pick?
        The real question is, will you trust your heart,
                        Or your mind?
            Which is more important to you;
            Facing the fact that you lost but followed your heart,
            Or basking in triumph and eventually be consumed by the black hole that is--
            Or was--
                                    Your heart?



                        Lives are on the line and you made your choice
            Not thinking twice about the words that were spoken to you from the one you
[pretended not to]
                        love,
            But now no longer even care to mourn over.
                        They were "an eye for an eye"
       And held much more depth than you realized then.



By taking the life of someone so close and equal to you,
It could only be a matter of time before you met the same fate as well.

[You are  e q u a l  and  n e e d  to stay  b a l a n c e d, otherwise you will--]



                        Will peace come to you now?
                        In a place where right and wrong,
                        Up and down,
                        And only nothing
                        Can exist.
                        Will you find the love you couldn't have in the realm of the living?



            Maybe that was your plan all along...
                  To leave this place, and venture to another,
                      Where your initial motives do not matter,
                           So that you can finally be together?



            Yes, surely everything went

                        Just as planned.
Spoiler warning...?



Sooo I finished Death Note this weekend. [And I did this in English class]
I know this isn't accurate AT ALL, but I just keep thinking about it, so I thought s c r e w i t, I'm writing the damn thing anyway, and cross my fingers, hoping you'll find it p r e t t y.

If you don't get it, it's pretty much me lightly ranting at Light [no pun intended with the word "light"].


I'll write a real fanfic soon.
Actually, I already have, it's just in a journal that is currently not in my possession. When I get it back, I'll submit it. xP


Or, as with all my poetry, this could be not DN related at all.
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HippieNote's avatar
I love poetry with unregular bases (sp? o_O)
as long as it makes sense of course.
Which this totally did.
Light doubting/mourning over his love aka enemy aka equal aka...
WHATEVER he was to him, I like it.