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I hate you.

I hate everything</i> you do.

Everything,

about you.

I hate the way your lips look in the sunlight.

I hate the way your laugh sounds.

I hate the way you look when you've
just gotten out of the shower.</u>

I hate the way you look at me,
with all that secluded emotion.

I hate you!

I just hate the way you can make me do
all these ridiculous things, and</i>
Say all these sappy words.

I hate them. Hate them!

I hate the way my heart</i> goes
psychotic whenever I see you, or
get a whiff of your hair... Your skin...

I hate the way I want to kiss</u> you,
Every second.
Of the day.

I hate the way I feel like there's a
fire inside me when I catch them looking at you, or

you looking at them, and

I just hate how I'd let you walk all over me...
Just to make sure that you like me, if only but a friend...

I hate the way you make me feel!

Because it feel so good!

I hate you for making me feel this thing
called love because it makes me so happy,</u>
and surely I
do not deserve it!

And I hate you for not punishing me...
Give me a broken heart, please,
I beg of you...

I hate you for being you, because,
If you were not you, I would not love
you!

Because I shouldn't hate you, but

I do.</i>
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:iconwhycantiflyaway:
WhycantIflyaway Featured By Owner May 21, 2011   Writer
IT IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! :DDD
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sweet-yumi Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2010  Student Writer
Feel like that anymore. Don't really give a fuck I just hate.
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lilan8 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2010
aiyyah, this explains how I feel MOSTLY....it's just that I don't wanna kiss him every second xD
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shecravesrevenge Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
It a tiny bit confusing.
But I totally get it.
It's almost exactly how I'm feeling currently.
I absolutely love it!

You get a llama andd a watch! :tighthug:
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NarutoFreak321 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2008   Digital Artist
Instant Fave.
I feel like this all the time, honey.
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:iconregndyr:
regndyr Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
its so fraking amazing!
i never read a so beautiful poem<3
im a big fan of you now C:
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:iconroxyoblivion:
RoxyOblivion Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
xD Thank you!
I'm still amazed, since this is one of those... I-didn't-put-any-effort-into-it pieces. :O_o:
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regndyr Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
Please write more<3333
I wanna read more of your poems<3 :heart:
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:iconroxyoblivion:
RoxyOblivion Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008
Well, this: [link] was written in the same style, kind of. o_o I don't really write much poetry anymore. xD;;
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:iconregndyr:
regndyr Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008
awsome =3
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:iconsilence-chan:
Silence-Chan Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2008

That was absolutely beautiful! I actually know how this feels... Wow.
This is just amazing. I swear.
This is just...Just fantastic.

Thank you for writing such a beautiful piece. :heart:
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:iconroxyoblivion:
RoxyOblivion Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2008
Thank you for leaving such a nice comment! :heart: I'm glad you liked it so much. :)
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Silence-Chan Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2008
You're very welcome! :heart:
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:iconcranberrystarlet:
cranberrystarlet Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2008
amazing. just how i've been feeling recently

favourited XD
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:iconmetebaal:
metebaal Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love and hate can easily turn into each other very quickly that you cant even understand. Nice work!
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:iconwoofiamadog:
WoofIAmADog Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2008
Totally fits one of the couples I...created. Totally love it!
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:iconkisutzuitari002:
kisutzuitari002 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2008
OMG! This really indentifies me.... my dramatic and stupid story of life :XD:
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:iconalice-liz:
alice-liz Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2008
i really like it!

:+fav:
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:iconlucy-lunacy13:
Lucy-Lunacy13 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2008
Awesomeness!

Ironic that I'm listening to 'I Hate Everything About You' by Three Days Grace at the same time... XD
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stranger37 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2008
sweet....love is a sweet poison....hate is even sweeter.
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:iconmcrdarkas:
mcrdarkas Featured By Owner May 18, 2008
I love this....your awesome...I am going to watch you...
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:iconroxyoblivion:
RoxyOblivion Featured By Owner May 19, 2008
Oh really?
Lol, thank you so much! x)
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:iconmcrdarkas:
mcrdarkas Featured By Owner May 19, 2008
yes and your welcome:)
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yumie-darkness123 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2008
it was GORGEOUS~~
and full of emotion. it was written in a form of denial i believe.
'i love you but i dont want to admit it,so ill say i hate you when i dont,' kinda thing.

but anyways very good job^^
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RoxyOblivion Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2008
ooc-

You got it exactly right. ;)
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yumie-darkness123 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2008
im always right (j/k j/k)
lol, but it was very good.
who knew showers could produce this??
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studentofdust Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
ooh, very nice!!
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:iconabietic-acid:
Abietic-Acid Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2008
i really really like it...but i feel like ive heard something like it before already....maybe from the movie "10 things i hate about you"
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:iconroxyoblivion:
RoxyOblivion Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2008
ooc-

o__O Really?
I've never even heard of that movie. ^^;
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SayWHAT-AnimeAngel Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2008   Filmographer
Aww . . . that was sad and sweet. In a . . . strange way. :O_o: It reminded me of this one part of this one fanfiction I'm writing, strangely . . . "I hate loving you!" . . . Yup. Very much reminds me.
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RoxyOblivion Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2008
ooc-

Nice. =]
Hate and love are very close opposite things.
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SayWHAT-AnimeAngel Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2008   Filmographer
Apparentally love and hate are triggered by the same sensory thingies in the brain. 8D And I learned that from an Akuroku fic. Nyah! XD
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RoxyOblivion Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2008
ooc-

AkuRoku can be quiiiiiiiiite educational. ;]
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RPGLuver Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2008
That ties into what I am feeling right now, truly touching.
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RoxyOblivion Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2008
ooc-

Glad my writing could touch you like that then. =]
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XoXoSimplyMeXoXo Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2008
Your such a good writer. This makes me think of my crush..I hate him so much for making me love him>:(
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:iconlethal-paralyzer:
Lethal-Paralyzer Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2008
this remends me of some one but...who?
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:iconroxyoblivion:
RoxyOblivion Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2008
ooc-

I... Don't know. o_o
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zebra-girl24 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2008
ooo your a good writer
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:iconroxyoblivion:
RoxyOblivion Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2008
Thank you n_n
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Neko-Lucy Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2007
wow roxas really powerful
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:iconroxyoblivion:
RoxyOblivion Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2007
Thank you :thanks: =]
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Roxaslover3 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2007
wow!! *in awe, eyes tearing up* you're soo good at writing!!!
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Roxaslover3 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007
you're welcome!!!
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:iconroxyoblivion:
RoxyOblivion Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2007
>//< Thanks!
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xTAiNTEDX3L0VEx Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*feels

this made me cry a wee bit :love:

:thumbsup: :heart:
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:iconroxyoblivion:
RoxyOblivion Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2007
:hug: Thanks so much n_n
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xTAiNTEDX3L0VEx Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no problem :hug:

when you gonna write more Oblivion High???

:D :heart:
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xRoxas4everx Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2007   Writer
thats.. um.. beautiful.. wow.. *smiles slightly*

... its awesome ^^
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:iconroxyoblivion:
RoxyOblivion Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2007
:aww: Thanks!
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