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I hate you.

I hate everything</i> you do.

Everything,

about you.

I hate the way your lips look in the sunlight.

I hate the way your laugh sounds.

I hate the way you look when you've
just gotten out of the shower.</u>

I hate the way you look at me,
with all that secluded emotion.

I hate you!

I just hate the way you can make me do
all these ridiculous things, and</i>
Say all these sappy words.

I hate them. Hate them!

I hate the way my heart</i> goes
psychotic whenever I see you, or
get a whiff of your hair... Your skin...

I hate the way I want to kiss</u> you,
Every second.
Of the day.

I hate the way I feel like there's a
fire inside me when I catch them looking at you, or

you looking at them, and

I just hate how I'd let you walk all over me...
Just to make sure that you like me, if only but a friend...

I hate the way you make me feel!

Because it feel so good!

I hate you for making me feel this thing
called love because it makes me so happy,</u>
and surely I
do not deserve it!

And I hate you for not punishing me...
Give me a broken heart, please,
I beg of you...

I hate you for being you, because,
If you were not you, I would not love
you!

Because I shouldn't hate you, but

I do.</i>
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:iconwhycantiflyaway:
WhycantIflyaway Featured By Owner May 21, 2011   Writer
IT IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! :DDD
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sweet-yumi Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2010  Student Writer
Feel like that anymore. Don't really give a fuck I just hate.
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lilan8 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2010
aiyyah, this explains how I feel MOSTLY....it's just that I don't wanna kiss him every second xD
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shecravesrevenge Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
It a tiny bit confusing.
But I totally get it.
It's almost exactly how I'm feeling currently.
I absolutely love it!

You get a llama andd a watch! :tighthug:
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NarutoFreak321 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2008   Digital Artist
Instant Fave.
I feel like this all the time, honey.
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:iconregndyr:
regndyr Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
its so fraking amazing!
i never read a so beautiful poem<3
im a big fan of you now C:
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:iconroxyoblivion:
RoxyOblivion Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
xD Thank you!
I'm still amazed, since this is one of those... I-didn't-put-any-effort-into-it pieces. :O_o:
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:iconregndyr:
regndyr Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
Please write more<3333
I wanna read more of your poems<3 :heart:
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:iconroxyoblivion:
RoxyOblivion Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008
Well, this: [link] was written in the same style, kind of. o_o I don't really write much poetry anymore. xD;;
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regndyr Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008
awsome =3
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